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@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ If your channel has a particularly high level of verification set, you may also
Croccyfocus uses the "delete messages" permission to enforce hyperfocus mode, and uses the "write chat messages as your user" permission to be able to delete *your own* messages in hyperfocus mode (since only the streamer can delete their own or other moderator's messages).
-*Croccyfocus will never send chat messages with another user's account, will never delete messages outside of hyperfocus mode, and performs no recording of messages or user information aside from usernames, IDs, commands (and information therein), and temporary logging of hyperfocus deleted messages for development purposes.*
+*Croccyfocus will never send chat messages with another user's account, will never delete messages outside of hyperfocus mode, and performs no recording of messages or user information aside from usernames, IDs, commands (and information therein), and temporary logging of messages deleted during hyperfocus for the purpose of confirming and addressing bug reports.*
## Using Hyperfocus
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-Users can check when their (and others) hyperfocus sessions will end with `!hyperfocused` or `!hyperfocused @user`.
+Users can check when their (and others') hyperfocus sessions will end with `!hyperfocused` or `!hyperfocused @user`.
However to make it even easier, streamers can add the *focuslist widget* to their streams,
which displays all the users active in the stream who are hyperfocusing, and when their focus will end.
- Croccyfocus judges whether a user is 'active in the stream' by *whether they have written in the stream in the last 4 hours*. This criteria may be adjusted slightly in future to better reflect the active users.